New day

A new day is coming,
above the hills i see.

A new song im humming,
for all the world and me.

 

 

A new  love is growing,

between me and you .

A new pain is living,

when you say we're through.

Reviews

[jasmine_x]

short but sweet!

[Sherratt133]

write more you fewl ;) this is good

[[KL]]

Ouch.. Harsh ending there.. Good nonetheless :)

[Lady Miyako-san of the ..]

I like it! The end is unexpected...beautiful...