I love every moment

I love every moment,

I hate every tear.

I’m only happy,

When your here.

 

You’re my star,

 In the night sky.

You’re my reason,

 That I try.

After everything I go through.

After every bridge I cross.

If at the end you’re in my arms.

Then it will worth the loss.

 

After everyone I’ve lost.  

After every tear I cry.

I wish for one last time,

 To see the beauty of your eye.

Reviews

[Fallacy Pharmacy]

I love the rhyming, the way you use full stops is very effective. Lovely poem...

[jasmine_x]

i like the rhyming :).
good work jake :D x

[Sherratt133]

its good :) but one thing doesn't make sense to me "To see the beauty of your eye." = ?

[[KL]]

Good use of rhyme here, a good write =D