BRITAIN

A quick piece

B roken,
R ight in the center,
I s our great land,
T eeming with evil,
A s if that's all we've ever known,
I t's time to rebuild OUR kingdom,
N ew starts are what we need.

We have the power,
We have the means,
We have the capabilities,
So this is our finest hour.

Rebuild and rejoice,
The land we love,
Raise the flag,
High above.

We may be broken,
And beaten down,
But we're a nation,
Who are mighty and proud.

So stand tall,
With your chest out wide,
We're a nation of survivors,
And our pride shall never die.

Reviews

[minisla]

Not the only place that's crippled by a new regime

[Infinity Blues]

Britian does have a way of calling you back, doesn't it. Lol. I moved back awhile ago, can barely stand to leave this mighty place :P
the rhyme and flow were done very well. You have a great talent.

[quinfinn]

"this is our finest hour" Winston Churchill.....i have a portrait of him on my writing desk, looking at him right now. awesome write , my friend. i may be an American, but i was born in Wiltshire.....lived 8 years in England and miss her terribly. well penned!

[marty360]

Thank you for your review, I appreciate it :). She does have that certain sense that lures you back, a great nation she is indeed! Feel free to add me and read my other poems, I aim to upload at least once a day :).