Give Me It All

What's the point unless you're all in?

Give me the unbridled rage of an endless tempest
A storm so strong my landscape will scar

Give me the passionate lust of a first time lover
So intimate it reshapes my soul

Give me the heaviest sorrow of a heartbroken widow
A loss so much I could die

Give me the starlit joy of a first time parent
A love so strong I see no one else

Whatever it is you choose to give, give me it all
My heart only moves in absolutes

Reviews

[PoeticSorcery]

very passionate piece indeed.

[Mitch]

I'm glad it spoke to you. Thanks for the read and review

[WithinTheHeart]

I so love this passionate write!
From the lust to the pain....you want all, 100%.

"my heart only moves in absolutes" -- that truly says it all.
You ended this perfectly.

A definite favorite.
(Do I say that on all of your writing?;)

[Mitch]

I'm definitely happier with my end here than most, and it took me a little to find, which makes it a more satisfying moment. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Yes, you've said it in a few, but I have trouble deciding on a favorite if yours is also, so we share the same challenge.

As always, thank you for your words. They are valued.