Choices

Sex, drugs, acid and, gin

A love for all illegal sins

A true hustler

Married to the game

How did I get here?

Who is to blame?

Mother, Father, Teachers, Friends

I`m loving this road but,

where does it end

Does it end here

behind these walls?

Does it end in death

or not at all?

Will I run the streets for the rest of my life

or spend the rest of it homeless in struggle and strife

I feel trapped like a rat

no where to run

Get a job, get a "life"

or keep having fun

Everyone says it's for my own good

straighten up, be safe, it's a piece of cake

Happiness or saftey?

What choice would you make?

Author's Note

i'm new whatcha think

Reviews

[Angel Bird]

Great recap of the inner turmoil many teenagers, but not only teenagers, find themselves in at a certain point of their life. Not always an easy choice ...

You have done great here. It's an easy read that developes a wonderful own dynamic. Rhythm and rhyme in the right places!

Well done!!!

[JC Fox]

I like it, it's gritty and a great portrayal of what it's like to be in the mind of an addict.

[Brenda Sue]

It is good. I think it will speak to a lot of people. Great job.

[Chandra]

ha, this one hits home. it flows nicely, i like it.

[Phil Sanders]

I think its good ... rhythmic and well written ..

[Akaila]

Welcome!! I think this is good!! I would pick um... safety! lol!! i think! ya safety! anyway nice one!!!
~akaila~