Dinner With The Sun

There once was a monster who met a mouse
and they became great friends.
They would race and chase and dance around
and sometimes play pretend.

The monster, she would share her dreams.
The mouse would share his too.
So one day, when the pond dried up,
they knew what they should do.

They packed a breakfast and a lunch
and got ready to run;
thinking if they did their best,
they'd have dinner with the sun.

Reviews

[Marie]

I'm not sure what this is saying, but I like it.

[mattavelli]

They will run west.

[Emily]

I liked it!
Well done!
Keep up the great work!

[mattavelli]

Thank you, Emily.

[Coyote Poetry]

A very nice ending to the story. Thank you for sharing the poetry.
Coyote

[mattavelli]

Thank you, Coyote.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[several thousand]

Oh this is so cute! I love fun poems like this. It's like a breath of fresh air. Thanks for sharing. :)

[mattavelli]

Thank you for reading it, PF.

[andrew mitchell]

A cute story my friend and enjoyed

[mattavelli]

Thanks, Andrew. :)

[Gee]

A quick fun read Matt,sweet

[mattavelli]

Thanks, Gee. I wrote it for the kiddies.

[Gee]

Ah,ha,my IQ is your target market then..

[mattavelli]

BAh, you understood it without pictures. +30 points!

[Gee]

Oooh,I love piccies,'specially in the books I can read in the bath....

[Kajal Sharma]

its kind of different to refer monster as a female... well done

[mattavelli]

It makes a funnier image. Thanks for reading, Kajal. :)

[....................]

all I could think about was charbroiled monster and mouse by the time they caught the sun...an entertaining write, Matt

[mattavelli]

Thanks, FT. The next one is about their helicopter ejector seat....

[....................]

sweet...can't wait to see how they handle that

[Joshua Carl Cruz]

Super cute and quick to the end. Fun

[mattavelli]

Thank you, senior Cruz.

[Jordan]

But........did they??????

[mattavelli]

I doubt it... Thanks for reading, Kaiju.

[Jordan]

Any time. Just not yesterday at 4.