Four Line Valentine

I’ll long for you, like flowers do,

while the mean moon mimics the sun,

‘til breaking through, you dry dawn’s dew

in dizzying proof my world has spun.     

 

 

Author's Note

Please let me know what you think.

Reviews

[Norman 223]

Ah Matt. Does this poem signify that the earth moved for you too???

Norman

[mattavelli]

Thanks for reading, Norman. :)

[Davidgeo]

This was hot garbage... did you find that on a flower basket in the dumpster behind a newly divorced couples townhome?

Also, your about me... it's in the third person but you sign your name at the end? You're an idiot. Nice try though... You never sign your own 3rd person bio, that makes zero sense, you'd think that you'd have the common sense. But, eh, I'm thinking maybe I should expect less from a fellow like you.

[mattavelli]

Thanks for reading. :)
Ya, this was a sappy write. My wife didn't like it either. Haha
My About Me is divided into two sections. The second part is first person.
I enjoyed this comment the most. Have fun!

[Davidgeo]

We may indeed.