Run

A poem I wrote for my friend who is going through a lot right now. Don't give up and fight :-D

I ran, I ran with my naked foot

I ran, I stumbled and I stood again

I ran as fast as I could

But I always fall, no, this is not the end.

I ran, I ran with my gory foot

I tripped, I fell and wounded my knees

I ran as fast as I could

I left bloody footprints.

I ran, I ran with my eyes closed

I fell in pain, this time I didn't move

Tears and sweats ran down my face,

No! I can't stop now, I left a trace.

I crawled on the muddy grass

No matter the pain, I stood, I grasp

I will always run, move forward, live

and not give in.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the energy and hope in the poem. Sometime better to run than give it. I like the want and the purpose of the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Mirra]

Thank you for reading Coyote :-)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Konigin]

Oh my goodness girl! My heart is pounding! I love it... its perfect! It speaks thousands of volumes in 4 stanzas. THAT takes skill! (250/100)

[Mirra]

Thank you again Chelsea :-D I'm glad you like it.

[Konigin]

No problem! Never stop writing!

[Neeraj V Murali]

Well, this is awesome. I really loved it. It was as if I was connected to the poem... :)

[Mirra]

Thanks again. Really appreciate it :-D

[Angelic Sonata]

I like this one. It''s reflects on what's happening to me. :D

Thanks for the comments at my poems. :D

[Mirra]

Welcome :-D Thanks also for the review :-D

[Mirra]

Welcome :-D Thanks also for the review :-D