together forever

Together forever means I love you that I would never give up on us. I love you with all my heart, or whats left of it. I want to spend my life with you, I will never leave your side. The life I live is ment for you and only you the love of my life. I love you forever and always.

Sarah

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hill

Author's Note

Sorry it toke me so long to post a writing i've have writers block for a month

Reviews

[(Super) Heroes Never Di..]

It almost sounds like something you'd say to her, rather than a poem. Nonetheless, I enjoyed it all the same. Good work.

[Alex Crow]

Young love, so beauiful yet so quickk to slip away

[Chesney W.]

awwwww!!! this is too sweet!!..yea, its short and to the point, but its from your heart, that's all that matters!

[Heromen Selena]

I think you mean "ment" to be "meant". To me it seems, a bit dry of adjectives. It's direct and short to the point.

[Kuhr Gred]

wow.. short.. but.. wonderful.. full of expression and well explained.. i like it.. GREAT WRITE.. thanks for sharing
- Kuhr Gred

[olla]

a touching declaration.. post any thing during writers block.. even the grocery list.. soon the block will pass...

[R.A. Youngblood]

Yeah, it seems that you really love her, it's written from the heart and i like it!
Thanks for sharing..Keep it up buddy :D

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem of love. When love overtake you. Good to shout to the Gods the happiness you feel. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Aww, this is sweet and cute! I can tell it's from your heart. She would love this if she read it, I can promise you that! I've had, had writers' block lately too so I know how that feels!
Outstanding! :D



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