No One

If its a beginning
Its 'nother thing
I'm pretty sure
I'm hurting more

No one is there
No one to care
No place to be
No one for me

Get it somehow
I can feel it now
It wasn't wrong
The way is long

No one is there
No one to care
No place to be
No one for me

Author's Note

Less and light words. A very simple use of thought.

Reviews

[Island Hippy]

That feeling of being invisible is really strong and your short punchy phrases work very well. A great poem

[Mayank Chaudhari]

Thank you for your beautiful words,about my poem.

[Island Hippy]

You're very welcome

[B]

That feeling of emptiness
Being a no one
In a place where everyone is loud enough to be someone

Who cares anyways ..... Really well done

[Mayank Chaudhari]

Thank you solosolace.