World Peace

I've found the solution for peace on earth in only 13 words!!!

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World Peace 

will only begin

When the love for all things 

finally 

ends

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Reviews

[karmax]

ah, nicely put...the love for all things finally ends...set free the things you love and it will come back to you! nice job!

[knowman]

I really like it, Knowman

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Very strong poem that holds truth!

[Sunflower 20]

short and simple, yet very meaningful, well said :)

[KimLove "The Beautiful ..]

very thought provoking peace... hey but you may be onto something here.

[sarah]

I am a but confused world peace will only begin when the love of all things ends? Wouldn't world peace start when we start loving everyone and accepting everything?

[Lily Mae]

I love it..an amazing write :) Great use of your 13 words :) x

[Matthew Kult]

Brilliantly written and well done with just the 13 words. It reminds me of a bomb, something so small can do such impact.

Regards,

Matthew

[ImagineItAll]

Okay, well you certainly have me thinking here...and you may have a point, and possibly the only way to world peace. Awesome!

[Tasha]

I liked this a lot, you did a great job.