My Wish
A Poem by
cherry
My love,
I wanna see
your smiling face.
I wanna hear
your sound of laughing.
And
I want to see
your convenience.
I do not wish to stay
beside you.
My only wish is
To fulfill your needs.
© 2010 cherry
Reviews
Nice thoughts, telling things exactly as they are. I'm puzzled by the switch from 'slang' (wanna) to more erudite English as the poem progresses.
Posted 15 Years Ago
Comforting words. But where is the supposed poem? :-|
Posted 15 Years Ago
Comforting words. But where is the supposed poem? :-|
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cherry yangon, Myanmar Yangon
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