Mazie

Sometimes I'm tye-dye.

Every emotion fighting to be free.

Laugh, hide, scream, cry,

It's all so confusing to me.

 

Although it's not my style,

everywhere joy spreads to,

and I end up in a smile.

but my other side continuously shines through.

 

Fire red is me.

My anger outweighing all.

Drowning in a deep red sea,

I refuse to break or fall.

 

Both sides truely me.

Neither side weak or lazy.

And as far I can see,

both sides make up Mazie.

Reviews

[The Empty Hour Glass]

I loved this work! Great job and wonderful rhyme scheme. A shameless statement of one's identity; again, great job!

[WickedPenWielder]

I love this, great self proclamation and detail. No spelling errors or anything that I can see, so keep it up.

[afra]

wow ...beautiful....kepp it up

[babygirlz]

colorful

[SeventhSin]

Good ryhming! :) I really like this. I can tell your a very powerful girl Mazie :)

[AarsalM]

Definitely interesting at how all of this is expressed through a poem, and within a certain point, I can relate. It's written nicely, a nice touch of two polar opposites.

[Owlgirl]

Nice writing! Cool how you can write so easily about yourself. Well done!

[RachelReaper]

cool! its like doing a portrait poem with colors, very creative.

[nigrum homonculus]

really cool. never read a poem the poet themselves. really interesting. well done

[Abbie]

great use of a poem:describing yourself how you view you. I think this was greatly written. Keep it up Mazie! :D