Spirit

This is not an actually poem kinda thing its a prophecy kinda thing I wrote for one of my book a year ago

Always been alone.
Not one friend in sight.
To change his heart of stone,
Five elements must unite.

Hate covering pain.
Lies covering honesty.
Heart conquering brain.
Spirit covered by monstrosity.

His heart can they renew,
Or the world will he destroy?
What will he choose to do?
Will he bring sadness or joy?

Author's Note

This is not an actually poem kinda thing its a prophecy kinda thing I wrote for one of my book a year ago

Reviews

[The Empty Hour Glass]

I'd say he'll bring sadness, but I'm somewhat of a pessimist. Great work, I could see this having a part (or being the central theme) of a book or story. Quite enjoyable indeed.

[SeventhSin]

Cool :) I like the concept

[Owlgirl]

Great job! I can just hear it being chanted and I see the whole scene just painted in my mind. Amazing write!

[Jordan A. Wilson]

Once again, you have captivated me.

[Harley (arbiter)]

Oh God at least I'm not the only one. Honestly I was picturing the three covenant prophets saying this. They each had a stanza. And you probably have no idea what I'm saying so I'll just stop. But I'm glad I'm not the only one thinking prophets.

[RachelReaper]

Then its a very cool poem-prophecy, i could see this being spoken by an oracle or ancient being. My imagination runs a little wild, so that's just what I picture :)

[Mazie Tackett]

no this one is for the book i wrote when i was in 6th grade its finished

[Harley (arbiter)]

I love it. It sounds so cool. The elements are powerful things if handled right. Hmm... this was really interesting. Is it for "the power"?