Pimple

This is a very old poem its from when I was in first grade

There is something on that face,
And now that face has no space.
It looks like its gonna blow.
So step away real slow.

Author's Note

This is a very old poem its from when I was in first grade

Reviews

[RachelReaper]

Interesting for a first grader. Haha, cool! :)

[Jordan A. Wilson]

This is funny. I like it.

[afra]

i hate pimples ......

[None]

I love the title. I think you could do something better with it now.

[nigrum homonculus]

haha ok this made me chuckle...then realise i had a spot on my face : /

[Laura Maidah]

Lol. You are a precocious first grader. I read this with strictly sexual innuendo. But it's fabulous. No issues.

[bursting colors]

i agree totally with babygirlz

[babygirlz]

That's so cute. You can tell you were little. Everyone should appreicate that. The innocence, the youth, the pureness.

[Harley (arbiter)]

That's kinda mean