SCREECH!!!!!

Screams at high pitches
Cause ears to burst.
Rising from the throat, making
Ears bleed deeply. Screams
Entering the ears,
Causing ears to split, and
Heads to pound.

Reviews

[The Empty Hour Glass]

This is so great, it gave me a headache! Not literally, but imagining screams can have that effect. The point is - you made it possible to imagine a scream, a sound, with words. Good job!

[MoriartyMesa]

There is a nice obscure message behind this and the reader is given a message, one they should listen to.

[afra]

this is the truth ....

[bursting colors]

soo true

[babygirlz]

Wow!! Yuppers that is a screech!!

[Jordan A. Wilson]

kind of vague, i like it

[Owlgirl]

Short, powerful, amazing, and there doesn't need to be more. Great writing. I can imagin the scene easily.

[SeventhSin]

Wow. So short but really powerful. I liked this :)

[RachelReaper]

Sounds like when i go on a roller coaster and by the end of it, everyone wants to strangle me because I was screaming so loud.... but well done on the poem, very accurate to the experience.

[nigrum homonculus]

eyyyy thats brutal. short but potent. nice work