New Day

Situations don't stay.
The sun will rise.
There will be a new day,
Always after cloudy skies.

Don't look back.
The past is gone.
It is a fact,
That its easier to just move on.

The pain will ease.
The tears will fade.
There's no time guarantees.
With sun comes shade.

Look to tomorrow.
It holds a brighter day,
Washes away some sorrow,
And restores you back to prime.

Author's Note

this was actually a relatively new poem I wrote the beginning of it at the end of school like the first four lines then the rest I finished yesterday

Reviews

[Neon]

I love this poem and i've already saved your this great piece. What a splendid creative piece of writing. An art, a talent's been expressed through your cool rhyming stuffs. I love your rhyme as well as your great poem. Your a very talented writer. Keep on and just write more. Well done!

[Praiser]

I agree with Jordan the message behind this deep

[Jordan A. Wilson]

I'll like the message behind this one.

[afra]

great write .....i enjoyed reading it

[MIB]

Great poem.. New days can bring happiness, and also sadness... I like your poem, reading the last verse you've opted for happiness... a wonderful wise choice.. keep up the awesome work... rhymes lovely. ;)

[RachelReaper]

This reminds me of a song by Kelly Clarkson called, "The Sun Will Rise". I find your poem to be a great way to look at sadness, because tomorrow does hold a brighter day (usually). :)

[nigrum homonculus]

its pretty good. very true message and you didn't try to go overboard with the wordplay either. well done

[Laura Maidah]

You missed the apostrophe in "it's easier to". Last word is marvelous. Last stanza is as well.

[bursting colors]

such innocence

[babygirlz]

keep writing your a wonderful writer