Darkness

Night is as night should be,

Deep dark and still.

Darkness blinds and darkness binds,

But still light burns and makes it blue.

 

Doors open and doors close,

Shedding light where darkness falls.

No light is pure,

No darkness eternal.

 

Each day ends when darkness calls,

Each night ends when light shines through.

All through time, an eternal fight.

There will always be light where darkness falls.

Reviews

[serenity]

this is really good

[allie_arrowz]

very pretty.
i like how it edges on the whole "light at the end of the tunnel" thing, which is inspiring.

[Kevin Anthony]

Nice use of the metaphor in this poem.
A promising debut, keep it up.

I really enjoyed this write, love the last stanza the best : )

[EternityWolf101]

I like the way it ends, "There will always be light where darkness falls." The feeling those words give off just fill me with emotion. Good work.

[Wolf]

I really like you poem. The way you put your words made you sound like a true philosopher :)
I really enjoyed reading your poem. Hope you will feel the same if you will read mine :)
God speed at writing new poems!