ARMAGEDDON VIOLIN

A short poem I wrote about an image that popped into my head one night.

I’ll play until my fingers bleed

And tears flow from my eyes

Until my dying body pleads

Until the music dies.

Reviews

[Glen Yumang Manese]

I take this as a musician who is seeking perfection... yet even when that cannot be reached... ones goes to the grave... still lingering for perfection...

[Baby Ricochet]

heavy

[Miguel]

Thanks :P

[astronaut]

Welcome to Writer's Cafe!
I absolutely love this, being a cello player myself...
There's a lot of emotion in this and I love your words.
Great job, keep writing. Looking forward to reading more of your work!
:) 100/100

[Miguel]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you like it. I'll make sure to put more stuff up; I'm happy I found this site :)

[Miguel]

Stunningly written, and so short, but incredibly effective.

[Miguel]

Thank you. Much appreciated!

[Walker Andreasen]

Perfect picture and very short. You were able to get your point across perfectly in 4 lines. That is poetic talent right there. Excellent write! Excellent write indeed!

[Miguel]

Thank you very much! I appreciate you taking time out to review this :)