Perspective

A Poem by Loner

How irrelevant

it may seem regarding love

when pettiness gnaws.

© 2008 Loner

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Sparrow

This makes me think of jealousy when there's no reason to be jealous. Lovely job Michael :-*

Posted 17 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Michael

It is a nice senryū. Caging something like love with only seventeen words is a challenge to say the least. You have done it well. At least on face of it at any rate.

Good job.

Posted 17 Years Ago

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Added on May 13, 2008

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Loner

Where the tumbleweeds blow along a vapid and dusty canvas, CA

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I've been declining into a state of moral and social decadence, only to rise again, and to seethe again. Stepping through each day in a perpetual ebb and flow, I dance from the chaotic to the sublime... more..