ROBIN III

A lost love

ROBIN III

Memories are like snowflakes

So fragile

Each unique 

So easily destroyed

Especially those of Love

Hate not so much

I have a thousand 

Upon a thousand

Snowflakes of you

I have kept them in the darkest

Coldest corner of my heart

Where they have never melted

Never will

Reviews

[Carrie]

Wow. What a way to describe a bad break up. Hopefully over time those snowflakes will melt and you'll remember some of the good times.

[Michael Sun Bear]

Thanks for reading Carrie

[Betty Hermelee]

Love is like a snowflake that will melt over time...the second verse is a knockout!!! WOW how you portray "hate" is strong and powerful and meaningful.... Great brevity!
Warmly, B

[Michael Sun Bear]

Thanks Betty, always nice to have you as a reader

[Desert Knave]

Wow. The second verse is emotionally raw and to the point. Nicely done. ~Jim

[Michael Sun Bear]

Thank you Jim. She was my first love. I have been in an angry mood and I actually emailed it to her last night.