Thank you all. haiku

Four AM awake

Make coffee then the Cafe

Need to feel the love

Author's Note

I am blessed to know all of you!

Reviews

[redd Brick Keshner]

Coffee works and so does tea!
The Café’s got the right blend
and most of all, it’s free.

[Davidgeo]

You might be relying too heavily on a false identity that reinforces itself through indiscriminate praise. See divya's poetry. Case study in mediocrity taken too far based on gladhanding... now that chickadee is delusional. It's like Meghan Markle, Ellen DeGeneres and Jada Pinkett Smith all got together and spawned a hell child disguised as a human. Meeee owwww!!! I think she's super hot... one day... one day. Divya and I are destined to spawn our own hell children ; ) The coffee we make after that, it will be praised. It will be praised hard.
so hard
I didn't mean to go on a rant there...

[DIVYA]

I'm so happy to be around this kind of joy and gratitude. Its a blessing to know you too. This senryu draws the reader. A heartfelt pull.

P.s. Dawn is ny favourite time too. I love to watch the birds fly out at sunrise. It makes my day!

[Chris Shaw]

Wonderful words of gratitude here Michael. So pleased you feel at home.

Chris

[emmajoygreen]

There is a place where welcomes might be invisible but they exist. Your words sum up a reason of listing important insignificance yet create poetry! Love lives where you search and find it, sir. You have found it.

[Einstein Noodle]

:) nice write .. tho I would call it a senryu ... haikus are involved with nature where senryus are involved with human conditions ;) thank you for sharing .. i enjoyed the coffee .. right here at the Cafe`
E.

[Michael Sun Bear]

Thank you. This is a new interest for me, and these are my first attempts. I had done some research, but obviously not enough. Some of my early attempts would seem to have elements of both nature and human action or inaction and reaction. For example my poem I titled High Seas. How would you classify that, or should it not claim to fit either? I also just came across a reference that indicated haikus and senryus should not bear titles. Any further advice?

[Einstein Noodle]

no ... not an expert of anything my friend :) ... just haikus are in nature and senryu in human foible ... but hey ... as long as we "get it out" ... and it's honest ... it's good eh!?