The Thief in the Night

A cat burglar strikes

He has come yet again

This thief of the night

Crafty cat burglar 

Of our upper stories

Does he come across the roof

Pick the lock

Find an open window?

I am old

I have no riches

Yet he returns

Strikes again and again

Stealing the only thing of value

He can find

I had a small horde still left me

But it dwindles, it dwindles

I fear my fate when all is gone

So ubiquitous this thief

He’s been given a name:

Insomnia

Each night a miser

 I cling to my two or three hours

Grieving in memory of the time

I had sleep in abundance

What will happen 

When he finally leaves me none?

Reviews

[Thomas W Case]

Such a clever and relatable metaphor! I love how insomnia is cast as a persistent, cunning thief—it captures the frustration, loss, and quiet dread so vividly. The imagery and rhythm make the struggle tangible. Very well done.

[Michael Sun Bear]

Thank you Thomas. While I tried to provide a little humor here, I do suffer terribly from insomnia.

[Curly Grace]

Such a vivid metaphor- the “cat burglar” image really captures how insomnia steals from you quietly and relentlessly. The slow, weary pacing makes the poem feel lived‑in and honest. Really resonated with me.

[Michael Sun Bear]

One can think up all kinds of crap in the sleepless wee hours of the morning. Thanks for reading.

[Aryo W]

It becomes a multiplied burden when insomnia merges with life's restlessness, such as loneliness and bodily pain. I've heard many stories like this, and I can truly feel the depth of this in your poem.

[Michael Sun Bear]

Very perceptive. I have severe chronic pain from autoimmune disease. I did not expect to be living alone, and yes it does get lonely.

[Buddhistboy73]

Nice write fella....

Indeed, this guy is a thief.....

These are my favourite lines:

He has come yet again
This thief of the night
Crafty cat burglar
Of our upper stories

This poem resonated with me as I also have issues with sleep...

Cheers...

BB73

[Michael Sun Bear]

Hey thanks for reading. You look pretty young in your photo. From my experience it only gets worse. My sleep issues started in my teens, now I’m in my 70’s and it’s severe. Blessings for the new year!