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My heart dies a little more everyday.

Every breathe I take is hell,

Take me out of my misery.

Quietly I scream,

Aching for love and compassion,

Some understanding.

My sad selfish cry out,

Doesn't please even you.

Pathetic,

Human being I am.

My twisted thoughts,

Cripple me,

And

Swallow my unwanted soul.

Whole.

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[mystic soul]

wonderful poem with lots of emotions in it.... great work!!!!!

[Krazy On The Outside]

I love it!
It's deep and emotional!
It's amazing! =)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Getting lost within our own feelings and thoughts can certainly cause us to shut out the world laving us to rot in a virtual self dug grave
very deep and powerful work... dark but enjoyable.

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I think the piece carries alot of emotion... it's speaks of a story that is unspoken. An image beyond what we read and at the same time, it is that unseen story that speaks like an echo, hauntingly so, through your ink here.

This poem speaks of our human way of blaming ourselves for what we feel is wrong. We feel alone, so we point the finger at ourselves rather than at what might be an actuall cause. For in life we are taught not to point fingers at others.

Alot of simple sadness and a silent cry for help echo out in your words.
Thanks for sharing.

Hugs!
Tara M Stone