Limerick

a short little limmerick about Tris and Tobias for all you Divergent fans:)

There once was a girl named Tris

She had the sweetest kiss

Tobias thought so

So when she would go

Tris is the one he would miss

 

Author's Note

if you have not read Divergent you need to!!!

Reviews

[Playing with Demons]

I love Divergent!!!!!!! I read awhile ago and when the cover of the poem was on this limerick I was totally stoked!! It's an awesome limerick very fun! Have you seen the cast for Divergent's movie?

[Megara]

Yeah I love divergent and thx for the review.I saw the cast for the movie but when I saw Tris I was pissed.she's blonde not brown get it right!

[Playing with Demons]

I know right!!! Some of the actors should not be playing the characters

[Megara]

I know and the book was so good!the least they could do is cast good actors.

[Playing with Demons]

Amen sister! If you read and liked Divergent you might like Maze Runner (unless you already read)

[Megara]

I'll have to read that sometime

[Playing with Demons]

absolutely! btw You should keep writing limericks!!

[Megara]

Thx I'll try to post another soon:)

[Samuel Dickens]

Limericks aren't often seen these days, so it's good to see this one. You've done a great job with it, too. It's so sweet. Absolutely, I can understand why Tobias would miss her.

[Megara]

Thank you, have you read the book that this is inspired by.it is called Divergent.

[Samuel Dickens]

No, I haven't. I'd say I'd check it out, but don't really have the time.

[Holly Mason]

sweet and fun limerick
thank you for sharing

[Megara]

you're welcome:)

[The Nude Writer]

Very fun Limerick :)

[Megara]

thank you:)

[quinfinn]

there was a young lass named Megara
who adorned herself with a tiara
then emerged as a poet
so her friends would all know it
can't wait to see what she writes tomorrow!
well done!!!!

[Megara]

Thank you and thanks for the clever limerick:)

[DogDrawler]

I've never read or heard of it. But I love your imagination! Pawsome poem!

[Megara]

Grrrrrrrrracias;)

[.......]

haven't read that one, but I love your write, cute!

[Megara]

thanks:)

[Luna Valentine]

Yay! I love divergent

[Megara]

me too!:)

[Luna Valentine]

i can't wait until the 3rd book comes out!

[Megara]

me too!
luckily it comes out this fall:)

[Luna Valentine]

im so exited! :)

[Megara]

i don't think i can wait!:)

[Star Wolf]

Nicely done and sweetly romantic!

[Megara]

thanks:)
have you read divergent?

[Kayelina]

I love this book!

[Megara]

me too!
it is my favorite!

[Kayelina]

I just finished Insurgent! It's amazing! I'm also trying out for the movie! Can't wait!

[Megara]

trying out?
are you an actress?

[Kayelina]

*Auditioning, excuse me ;) And yes, I guess you could call me that!

[Megara]

cool! do you live in holley wood?

[Kayelina]

No, although I wish I was!

[Megara]

:)