Pain

The watch beeps 

My stomach twist in pain

I feel scared and don't want to go home

I know he will hurt me

Not matter how good I was

The pain I will feel is nothing

I say thank you it felt good

Not another peep.

He beats me and beats me

I feel numb 

I hope this is the end

No more pain for time

Why doesn't he love me

Like mommy did before she died? 

I deserv this for a reason

A reason I don't know

He locks me in my room till morning.

I cry and cover up the scars 

And tell myself it's alright

No one will ever know and it will be alright... 

School starts and I keep to myself

Alone and quite 

Till another student sees my eye and tell the teacher 

She ask how I got it I never say a word

She takes me to the office 

My father will be coming 

I beg for him to stay at home 

But I don't say a word. 

He got his in the end no more pain for time 

He is gone for ten years

I'll be on my own by then

I promise myself I won't see him 

Not now not again...........

Reviews

[Owlgirl]

Wow, very emotional and this is amazing. I love the format of the writing, to the whole rythm and words. A horrible reality for so many people, well done, amazing description.

[BorealPoet]

Wow... This is powerful. Blown away over here very very well done! Thank you for sharing this piece!

[Keith]

You expressed the horror of an abused child's life perfectly.
I could tell because it affected me by bringing out both sorrow and fury. You can guess who gets which emotion.
I like the resolve and hope your bring to the piece and the end.
Very well done Angelove

Here are just a few things I noted:
My stomach twist(s) in pain
No more pain for (a) time
I deserv(e) this for a reason
She ask how I got it (.) I never say a word
I hope these help

[Keith]

I'm sorry to hear that. No one should ever, EVER, have to live though the pain of abuse!

[emman]

The title says it all :(

[ghost writer]

I hate the thought of a child going through this..I know it happens but I cannot comprehend it..