Speechless

My mouth collects words

From the pit of my stomach

None have to be said

Reviews

[Mockingbird]

sounds like one doesn't have to say a word to the one they love because their eyes and actions say it all.

[Amelie]

and for the sissy machos, yes.

[Pax]

aha! speechless to the core...

[Steven]

I love it! It's fantastic. It's really what a haiku should be. Succinct, simple, impacting. Can I be a grammar nazi for one sec? Have > Has. Nice write!

[Amelie]

Oh why thank you Steven! "None" can be used as a singular or a plural noun which is based on its etymology; it would depend on the context though. But I guess I missed on this one!lol I used "words" so yeah. Thanks budd :)

[Steven]

Sure. Great haiku Mel :)

[h d e rushin]

my favorite also with a hint of that Dickinsonian dash. well done, dana

[Amelie]

thank you! and what happenstance, she's one of my faves :)

[Shmoke-Sifted Heftlande..]

my favorite!!!!!! I love how this is progressing...each is so visceral and inter-connective and profound..excited to see the artwork

[Amelie]

thanks john!I'm pretty excited to sit on the artworks for an entire afternoon, it'll be in pen and ink :)

[Shmoke-Sifted Heftlander]

please videotape and email me the raw footage! :)