Label Me

Poem about experiencing true love that conquers fears.

On a quest for something non-existent.

 But nonexistence only translates time into opportunity…

creating endless possibilities.

I was a single entity simply desiring to become whole.

 Through trials and errors...

I used the tools of experience handed down by time.

 "It is rightfully mine" says my living beating heart

 living in limited moments, course always changing, constantly adapting.

Hearing again and again “nothing is set in stone”.

I chose love, pure without conditions without dismissal.

It became my identity...and I became whole.

Now and then fears and hopes collided,

  labeling me fearful and love fearless.

“label me love…love label me!

 Through the joy and the pain...love  label me!

 Through the despairs and disappointments…label me love!”

Reviews

[ZackSnow9]

I had to read this twice. Yesterday and now today; beautiful.
I personally get an idealistic ellectric impulse of a man
becoming healed of his wounds and setting foot, after finding the possibility to,
either through god, or a superior way of wisdom-thinking in the world that
has its way of even making his life as easy, powerful and effective as death, into immortalaity
on the inside where it really matters. Where love finally
finds its home in the purest body amongst the rest. Having the
automatic symptoms of love, fear and hope; but in the purest degree.
As God says, "Fear the Lord. For the fear of God is clean.
This person is right even in the eyes of men as he is in the
eyes of God. This man shall prosper and inherit the kingdom of God."
A warriors quest reflection if tilt in the angle of the the many forms of war. Beautiful.

[Mel Lisa]

yes beautiful and excellent perspective:) thanks for reading!

[ZackSnow9]

No problem. I was thinking; would you likely be willing
to comment one of my writings. I was hoping and preferring
if you could read little jimmy, horror edition and the plague.
This place is socially death incarceration in deciet.
I stopped posting.
I'm a little skeptical about your profile and you behind it being even also.
I leave messages and get back nothing. Same when commenting,
beginning a conversation or even just asking a question.
Leave me a message please. This site has a social wicked
secracy. If people sees this, please read, comment, and message
me if you like. I'm normal too. I can't remember exactly
creating any un wanted perimeters.

[Mel Lisa]

no need to be skeptical. Most on here are real people just sharing their work and looking for support through reviews and people taking time to read their writes. I took a quick glance at your work and I notice that you write mainly stories. Most authors in your case get little to no attention on this site because people are intimidated when it comes to reading and reviewing long writes/stories. So mostly poems and poetry (short writings) will get reviewed. Does not mean your not good. you have skills! also some times it takes a lot longer to review stories because you may not have the time to read it all in one shot. so I would think about breaking the stories up in shorter pieces? don't be discouraged:) I will read your work and do my best to leave helpful review. thanks:)

[ZackSnow9]

Thank you for your honesty.
Yea, I do recognize the several poems I run into
more than anything else. I'm so used to the story telling.
But I am trying to understand poetry writing as well.
To broaden what all I can do in the writing world. And yes,
my stories are extensively long. Nearly majority of them.
My name Zack again and thank you.
Come to think of it; maybe you can message me
some pointers on how to approach poetry in the right way.
I have an idea, but its not certified. Just sensible self assumptions.
Lastly, your writing is amazing as well; magistic, a walk
that takes me more than a 1 tour to understand. Keep writing
until you levitate confetti. But, you can message me the rest if you choose to.
For not over using comment bar abuse. lol. Later.

[Dindella]

I love how beautiful and powerful this is. The font definitely helps, it's very urging and loud, the italics pleading even. I like that. Very clever usage. I must say, though, that I feel less like love labels you and more-so that it enhances your being. Love is eternal and unconditional, but I suppose this could also be read in an implication of desiring to be heard, as well. Desired to become whole through finding real love, through holding real love, the frustrations of searching and giving up and hoping again but never being able to stop looking. Because humans are social, needy creatures. . . and truly, there is nothing wrong with that.

[Mel Lisa]

thank you again. yes you got it correct! we are all imperfect in love. love is labeled fearless so what would be better than to be labeled the same...when we embrace love in our imperfections:)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Oh that is the kind of love I hope to find one day… love the blissful nature of expression in this poem.

[Sami Khalil]

True love dissipates fear and anxiety. Love creates endless possibilities. A wonderful write.