Always

My failed attempt at a haiku :|

O, My love, my sweet

Please, Dry your eyes,do not cry
Here I am..Always

Reviews

[Sexy P3nguin]

You dd not fail. This is a very good Haiku. Better than I could do. Although it is short (of course it is supposed to be) it shows great emotion. It Has a nice message behind it and it really shines in the Haiku world if you ask me. :)
-Dustin
I Love You

[Texas]

Trust me, it's not that bad. It's not bad to begin with. My first one (in Jr or Sr High) was, lets say "burning material". You've got putting a lot in three lines down. That's the hardest, I think. If you want some ideas, take a look at mine. (Yes, self-advertising) :)

[Dutch Jr.]

Aw, this certainly isn't failed. I like it. It was simple, yet heartfelt. I don't think you need the comma after "dry your" in the second line, though.