You Kissed Me

You kissed me..
Told me you loved me...
Tonight

You weren’t supposed to..
Yet, still...
Deep down, I knew
You were telling the truth

For what it’s worth..
Thanks, I needed that...
Unexpectedly, from you

Reviews

[Kent Rawski]

just a hohum kiss you don't seem enthralled yet you allowed it but to feel wanted even if not reciprocated Is better than none

[Kent Rawski]

I will add sometimes a human touch is what we need to carry us through

[KCthelastboyscout]

To be loved is the only way that you know you're alive. Sometimes you have to say the words and another person has to hear them ❤️

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Perhaps if not spontaneous an opportunity would have been lost - your words do project an 'aaaahhhhh' factor moment; both in wordplay and imagery - nice one! :-)

[Meliss@k]

Thank you so much phill! A lot of my writing recently had been based off of deal events- and it’s been nice being able to document things through poetry; while allowing others to read and experience small snippets of everything too :)