take me home

A Poem by abby.

just wrote this. no real explanation.

Can you take me home to where I belong?
Where the flowers with the razor blade petals bloom beautifully,
where fear coexists with love.
where it rains blood from crimson clouds,
and where night is day and day is night.
a place to bear my fangs and run free.
take me back to where I came from.
can you take me home?

© 2009 abby.

Author's Note

hahaha i dont really like this one, doubt you did either. i just have to get these things out of my head.

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Saturn's Lover

I liked it. I just think it needs some tweaking. Using the word "the" twice "Where the flowers with the razor blade petals bloom beautifully," could be fixed. Just needs to flow better. But i love the whole idea of it.

Posted 16 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

*~Kristy~*

I did like it. It was vampirish, I loved that!!!! Nice!

Posted 16 Years Ago

Tiff-AH!-knee�

i like it, kind of vampireish though :) but that's cool, dood.

Posted 16 Years Ago

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Added on November 12, 2009

Author

abby.

Madison, ME

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i'm evil. hahaha just kidding. kind of. i think that you'll find i'm quite confusing. just ask my friends. i like kitties. a lot. i don't usually write, but i always have good ideas and never have a c.. more..