Cutters Cry

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The silent weep

Of a cutters cry

Only it's not tears

That shed from her eyes

But red, fresh blood

From the open slash

That's how cutters

Silently crash

Reviews

[Calypso]

Amazing flow. The word has a good best to them. What is so odd about cutting is that bleeding is more comforting than crying. Of course there is crying but you feel like you can't control it.

[.Lost Soul.]

Exactly.

[4$H]

Simple and Powerful < 3

[Silent Knight]

I clicked on this by accident and I'm so glad that I did. I love the flow of the poem as well as the imagery. Very nice work.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This had a good flow. I used to be a cutter. And I agree with it. Cutters do crash right after that. It's hard to not cut now, but I can't go back. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Silent Knight]

You better not cut anymore, big sis. I will come find you.

[Angie Diane&hearts;&hearts;]

O.o I don't. The only time I get hurt anymore is at work by accident. Card board hurts sometimes...

[Silent Knight]

Tell me about it.

[Angie Diane&hearts;&hearts;]

Yeah I have a cut from one. It's gonna scar just like the last one.

[Mark Emerson]

good peace but we are never alone just remember that

[deaths calling]

exelent writing

[StayStronglilButterfly]

Remember, you are not alone. Stay beautiful, stay true, stay you, stay strong. ♫

[NITHIN PURPLE]

short and silent...good one

[Lexi]

that is exactly how it is. I love that you made it rhyme and how realistic you made it sound.

[Country Girl]

I like it, it's really good.!!