Daybreak

I was in the mood for a sonnet this morning.

  Photo bySiddartha (click for link)

 

 

You come along, sunshine to greet the morn
chasing gray shadows that roughly rule night.
You are the reason each new day's born
graciously giving to the morning's light.

  

And when clouds do brew and blow from afar
only beautiful sunshine do I see,
from eyes that beam like a heaven-sent star
with warming light to gently set souls free.

 

Lo, what of my soul dares be so bold
to give you a part of me you might yearn?
Humbly therefore, I cleave to love's gold
and give all of me, my heart in return.

I see you as daybreak - never to set.
I love you unashamed without regret.

 

 

Reviews

[Fran Marie]

Lo, what of my soul dares be so bold
to give you a part of me you might yearn?
Humbly therefore, I cleave to love's gold
and give all of me, my heart in return.


What a beautiful Sonnet you have penned here

I simply love the turn on this piece " Lo, what of my soul dares be so bold" perfect!!


such lovely poetic expression, well DonE! I say~Fran Marie

[MagiCrystal]

Wow... this is a melody of love.. and I want to sing it and dance it.. magical

[Adela Muresan]

The last two verses are awesome.
Nice picture, it matches the poem very well. You have reflected the happiness of loving, perfectly trough the imagery.

Great write Michael, great write.

A.M.

[Valentine]

WOW..this is your best one yet..I can't even say which line I love the best..This is going in favorites..God bless..Valentine

[Ama Lew]

You've quite the gift for sonnets. It's very well written and heartfelt.

[Ladysue]

This was such a beautiful piece of expression. The emotions ran deep and brought warmth to the reader. A heartfelt piece and a pleasure to read.

[sherie carter]

I loved this poem-mainly because of the emotion behind the words. You did an outstanding job!

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

This is quite stunning. What lovely words to express such feelings and natural occurences. Wonderfully captured. Beautiful words that warmed my heart this morning. Thank you for sharing your talent. Just beautiful!
Light,
Siddartha