Valley Beyond The Stars

I wanted a song that said "I love you", "Goodnight" and "Sweet dreams" all at once. This was the end result. Not sure if it's pretty but I hope you like this!!

Valley Beyond The Stars

 

Across glistening oceans far away

Towards darkness embracing the world

As daylight fades into the mist that shrouds my soul

 

Beyond distant clouds of gray

As a serenade begins slowly to unfold

Like the pages of our story never told

 

And under the silent brilliant stars

You know my heart is with you

As we look to the dark violet sky

Beyond the radiance of the moon

Shining far beyond the rivers of the tears we’ve cried

But they’ll take us to a garden of serenity and light

Beyond shining mountains high, and glaciers crimson and white

 

Close your eyes and soar with me

Beyond the distant realms of time

Into the heavens far beyond the stars

Beyond crystal blue skies and emerald seas

Embrace this moment till the end of time

As you’re lying here so deep in my arms

Like two roses blossoming in the moonlight

Never ever let this feeling go

We’re two lovers embracing in the candlelight

Across valleys far and peaks of snow

For these words are all I have to take your pain away

So take my hand and let’s fly away

 

Towards fading sunset over the sands

Across skies of crimson, vermilion and gold

Look to the valley far beyond the stars of destiny

 

Over blissful dreams and distant lands

Though this world may become so cold

You know you have my love and the best of me

 

Beyond forests shrouded in sorrow

Over seas and islands so far

Your smile’s a light I gotta follow

As I reach to where you are

Where clouds of magnolia white drift by for you and me

Where the sun shall shine as far as the eye can see

So close your eyes and set us free

 

Close your eyes and soar with me

Beyond the distant realms of time

Into the heavens far beyond the stars

Beyond crystal blue skies and emerald seas

Embrace this moment till the end of time

As you’re lying here so deep in my arms

Like two roses blossoming in the moonlight

Never ever let this feeling go

We’re two lovers embracing in the candlelight

Across valleys far and peaks of snow

For these words are all I have to take your pain away

So take my hand and let’s fly away

 

Through bitterness and frost, through the dark and pain

Let all your love come and conquer me again

In a special place where we can be whoever we are

 

No matter what the cost, through the spring and fall

As I race across the silent lands as I hear your call

And I’ll find you at the valley beyond the stars

 

Close your eyes and soar with me

Beyond the distant realms of time

Into the heavens far beyond the stars

Beyond crystal blue skies and emerald seas

Embrace this moment till the end of time

As you’re lying here so deep in my arms

Like two roses blossoming in the moonlight

Never ever let this feeling go

We’re two lovers embracing in the candlelight

Across valleys far and peaks of snow

For these words are all I have to take your pain away

So take my hand and let’s fly away

 

So close your eyes, our special place of dreams isn’t very far

Where love beckons deep inside our very hearts

In the valley far beyond the stars

Reviews

[A.Lee]

Beautiful. So serene, and the imagery was just astounding. Great work.

[KAREN]

Breath taking and so beautiful!! Has a peaceful sense to it!
100/100

[JENY]

beautiful write...
that seems to be rhyming with...
reader's heart beats....
romantic...!
imagery...superb

[Siddhartha]

Beautiful and incredibly romantic...a divine love odyssey through the worlds of the fantastique...wow...

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Beautiful..!!!

[Nicaushio Yamaki]

Great work

[Hello, Goodbye]

bloody brilliant.. the imagery and overall tone is impressive..

[Valentine]

Is the repetition of verses because you wanted this to read like a song? It is a very pretty write..lol and God bless..Kathie

[Linear]

Ah.......Follow me follow see what you see, I'll take you somewhere you've never been, high on a mountain deep down in the sea to far away lands you can travel with me...............your poem made me think of that, it's really sweet the picture you painted with your words left me with colours in rhyme...such a place :O)

[sarah]

This is beautiful!