Beautiful Soul

What a waste of a beautiful soul,

taken by the chaotic thoughts she couldn’t control.

Internally murdered by the people who forced her tears to pour.

broken by the self hate she couldn’t ignore.

Now her body lies cold and stiff on her bed,

she just hopelessly lies there dead.

She overdosed for she believed it would set her free,

but sadly not even death could end her misery.

Reviews

[VelvetRosetta]

A sad reality that many endure and a sad ending, depriving ones life in order to end their pains.
Last line is powerful.

[Mia C.]

I concur. Thank you!

[SonOfPlunder]

Nice..very touching, and unfortunately also very true more often than not. Nicely done

[Mia C.]

Yeah, it is. It's very sad. Thank you for the review!

[SonOfPlunder]

You're welcome

[Sami Khalil]

The title , the poem , the wording were all great. Set her free from her misery is a great cry...Bravo............

[Mia C.]

Thanks! :)) I greatly appreciate your review.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)...............