walls

still looking and still thinking

                  Yellow walls think

                  Smug achievement

                  We survive leaves

                  And reflect light

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i saw a lot in this...i saw someone who cannot commit...constantly leaves relationships...
as smug achievement...leaving someone broken, but who survives and still finds light, despite the heartbreak.
j.

[Michael Oliver]

Your comment hit me Jacob - had not seen this interpretation from my normal quais Zen stance - but oh yes can feel the overpowering truth in what you write - but in my case I was and am the broken one - Again that mystic mix of the shapes in our psyche that see the world in their own light, Good one Jacob thank you