Mom of the Year

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Years of agony, sorrow and tears,

Clouds of vehemence forthcoming with fear.

Hate-filled symmetry luminescent with vanity,

Heart full of obscurity, abhorrence and animosity.

Granting love as reward, yet it is punishment,

Maintaining detachment at the sake of the self.

Harming one’s spawns out of selfish yearning,

Causing aching, meandering, and burning.

What’s left behind lingers, with the sting of constant anguish.

Adoration and humanity, you do not discern,

You self-elected mom of the year. 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like how you use the language. Making every statement important.
"Granting love as reward, yet it is punishment,
Maintaining detachment at the sake of the self.
Harming one’s spawns out of selfish yearning,
Causing aching, meandering, and burning. "
The lines above could stand alone. You left the reader with something to think about. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[BrokenWingedPhoenix]

Thank you, poetry is cheaper than therapy. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are right and you are welcome.

[TrishArias]

This was great!!!!! I love all the descriptive words.

[BrokenWingedPhoenix]

Thank you, I really appreciate that. :)

[Perkele.7885]

You seem to have quite a diversity of points of achievement that seem to qualify you strongly as a candidate
for mom of the year. Were there any other challengers this annul?

[wordman]

sad write,feel the disappointment in this great write !

[BrokenWingedPhoenix]

Thank you, writing helps get it all out. :)