Splendid Duplicity

I love summing up my thoughts in as few lines as possible...unless I have mania then we'll be here all day.

Vehement, corrosion, oxidation called life.

Be wary of the appalling mortality of thine regrettable life.

Gears always turning, exceeding and burning,

Churning and winding thy self through sorrow and plight.

Fuming and twisted, lament and ye listen,

Halt…for sorrow and inclination are nigh.

 

Reviews

[alifeacoustic]

Life neatly summed up in so few words. I really like the words you chose in this write, corrosive thine regrettable life. Thank you for sharing this, I really enjoyed reading it.

[BrokenWingedPhoenix]

Thank you so much. I try to sum everything up in as few lines as possible, I know some people would rather not read more than five lines. I suppose I just like to get to the point, thank you for your kind words.

[alifeacoustic]

You are very welcome.