A Single Tear

A single tear

is a small sad reminder

or the breaks he did

to his oldest daughter

her single tear

runs down her cheek

as the promise made breaks

the promise meant to be keep

a single tear

is a small sad reminder

that makes the oldest daughters

heart weep

Reviews

[Poeticpiers]

I like the theme but your tenses need attention as does your spelling
It is always wise to spell check and re edit before posting