Empty

Tear out my black heart

Taste blood from my open wound

Now I am empty

Author's Note

I never write or generally read haikus so I hope this is ok!! God bless

Reviews

[Rose of Gondor]

Coolio, you have a haiku too! This is LOVELY!

[Lost in Wonderland]

Why thank you kind person! God Bless:)

[Rose of Gondor]

Haha, tis no more than what you did for me!

[Lost in Wonderland]

:)

[Rose of Gondor]

XD

[McKinleyA]

Very nice. I always found haikus to be a bit hard, so its always nice to see someone excel. :D

[Lost in Wonderland]

thank you:) God Bless

[Seyi Ojenike]

Short and lovely. Sometimes too many words don't seem to fit into it in certain emotional displacement we have, only few words seem to suffice. You are good!

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you so much! I really appreciate all your reviews:)
God bless

[Seyi Ojenike]

Amen and you too