I found my soul!

I found my soul!

I use to be a fighter

I use to live a dream that I never dreamnt

But now i'm a writer

And i'm contempt

I raised above those who pulled me down

I wish I new then what I know now  

 i'm the talk of the town 

People they ask me how

But all there is to say is live the dream you choose

Be bold and be brave

If you do this you'll never loose

 And most of all never be naive 

This is how I found my soul !

 

Reviews

[Rene Salinas]

It is a thing of wonder the soul Micky but also a very unique receptacle. As I havent got a clear picture I only know from what I have read and experienced at times i am made to feel that is open both ways so to speak on one hand point upwards all your dreams and inspirations that you point out and motivations and ideals and on the other it points down and everything that relates to the material world which binds us and keeps us on our toes.

It is all in your writing really

Thankyou

[micky]

Thank you for all your wonderful reviews,It means a huge amount to me considering your writing ability and killer skills. I really appreciate it Rene:)

[Rene Salinas]

No worries

[Echoes of Eros]

Your words sounds so beautifully on fire! Soaring and rising up from the ashes, you are creating a future for you from within, and so glad that no one can take that away from you. Brilliant! xo

[KAnderson]

Fabulous! The introspection is enlightening, just how I feel about my journey in the world. Careful of typographical or spelling/tense errors, need to clean those up and it'll be perfecto!

[micky]

Thanks so so much!!! I always suck with the tenses but will try to better them :}

[KAnderson]

No worries, just trying to be helpful. Your writing is excellent otherwise. ;)

[micky]

I always appreciate criticism Thank you so so much!!!

[Lauriegirl]

this is an amazing and thought provoking piece. You write so well and uniquely