There... Reality...

There... Reality...

She awakens from her nightmare 

Trying to run from what it left in her mind

Broken beyond a repairable state

But her reality is life isn't fair

They left her behind

And now... she lives with knowing hate

He longs for isolation

Anxiety takes it's tole 

He questions his state of mind

Filled with frustration

He decides that he played the wrong role

His reality... life isn't kind

Why is reality so cruel?

Why must it ruin them?

Why? 

 Maybe they were the 'fool'

Is this there "condemn" ?

Guess it doesn't matter, knowing they will die 

Reviews

[AprilRN1210]

reality can be cruel.. it can eat away at us... if we allow those doubts, fears, and evil to creep in and control our thoughts.. the flow is very good in this one.. and I love the subtle repetition.. it helps reinforce and intensify in all the right ways...

think you meant "toll" instead of "tole"..

also in next to last line think you mean "their" instead of there.. but not sure it works with just "condemn".. doesn't sound right in my head.. maybe use "doom" instead.. I dunno..

overall, well done Micky!

[micky]

Thanks April :)

[Tara Togoland]

Another true and sad reality of the world. Well said and pointed out. Nice work Micky.....nice work.

[micky]

Thank you so much Tara this is actually one of the few pieces I like :)

[Rene Salinas]

The reality of death. On one had at times it becomes depressive driving people to do things that may harm. Others it is a liberating feeling as nothing to loose becomes the driving force and it sets them up to do things that they would have never tried before. The irony hey?

Death wants you to appreciate life.

Thankyou

[micky]

Thank you Rene it is a ironical situation =D

[Malister Mikey]

Such a sad and beautiful piece really good job Micky

[micky]

Thank you so muck Mikey :}