Move along

I didn't know 99 steps to move on

I didn't read books on the topic ever

But since you been gone

I learned don't say never

I could speak of all the trouble I gone through

I could tell the world how this has left me with hate

I could blame it all on you

But arn't you the same person who taught me life isn't always great

It's not fair I agree

But it's time to move along

The choice is up to me

Weak? or Strong?

My hands are shaking cold

My mind scattered on the floor

Time to feel bold

Time to end this inner war

Author's Note

Reviews

[Echoes of Eros]

Everything flows from you like a song, and your music is so strong; filled with courage. There is a pain in letting go, in losing someone. You seem to take the pain and transform it into wings. xo

[micky]

wow thank you for the amazing words

[Freesearch 101]

I really like this one it stuck out to me. You have great talent with your writing, makes me want read more of your material.Keep up the great work!!!

[micky]

Thanks so much :p

[Freesearch 101]

Your very welcome!!!

[alan peter kelly]

there seems always to be factions fighting like cracked eggs scrambling in my brain pan for the most consistent cerebral recipe to the breakfast of champions :) id move on but the eggs are free range and must be eaten and digested before any such decision is made ;) i will always make a meal out of what should be an easy decision why? I have a head like a coconut with a skull that's as thick as a brick. Broken things can be mended and loved...more for the cracks and my hands are cold due to poor circulation. Nothing is fair and equitable i blame myself for the choices i make...then...move on...

[micky]

Wow that is soo sweet...thank you sooo much i really am greatful for your amazing words:)`

[alan peter kelly]

You are welcome. Thank you for reviewing my poem tree :)

[Olumegbon]

nicely written, thanks for sharing... sometimes, you just have to learn to move on.

[micky]

So true, thank you so much Olumegbon :}

[Pushkar Prabhat]

powerful and with a good message!!!
Never say never but know when to move on......
i liked it!!!
:)

[micky]

Thank you so much Pushkar :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

You are welcome!!! :)