terrible things

I know I have been avoiding you

But to be honest I don't know what to do

...

Nothing I say

Is gna make everything okay

...

Nothing I mean

will take back what we have seen

...

Nothing I have been through

will explain me to you

...

I can't connect

its me,im wrecked 

...

It's me

Honestly I know we family

...

But I can't face the music right now

So please don't ask me to,coz I don't know how

...

Don't pretend that you have stood in my shoes

Coz thats an argument you will lose

I swear if I could I would go back in time

But right now im trying to focus on being fine

I know im being selfish,considering the past week

I know that you don't really sleep

I know that you cry at night

Believe me its a sore sight

Breaks my heart 

and the worst part?

I did this to you,I am sorry

I know that I make you worry

I know I drive you insane

But believe me I am filled with pain

My mind punishes me enough

This week has been rough 

This week is just to much

I just need you to be my crutch

But your thousands of miles away

so at the end of the day

I turn to the only friend I have,what will the end of that bottle bring?

Right now I'll take anything

I turn to terrible things

as long as it turns of the shouts,scratches and rings

in my head

Right now Im looking for a answer other than "dead"

So if this is to much of a leap for you to understand

Than its time for our goodbyes,coz there are bigger things at hand

 

Reviews

[Justin]

great job :) it tells a great story, the format is awesome, great job :)

[micky]

Thank you for your kind words

[Justin]

your welcome, i cant wait to read your next piece of writing :)

[micky]

awww thank you :)

[micky]

awww thank you :)

[Justin]

your welcome :) :)

[andrew mitchell]

Your views say it all!! a great write Micky

[micky]

Thank you :)

[Robert]

Micky, On a side note every time I write your name it autocorrects to "Nicky" ...but it finally took...

A very emotional piece here. Written very well and you have made your voice in words clear. Good job.

[micky]

Hahaha finally ...Thank you Robert for the kind words

[Solidad]

This is a beautifully written cop out if I have ever seen one. Nonetheless it is an amazing work of art that is truly rhythmic.

[micky]

Thank you for the kind words

[micky]

Thank you for the kind words

[Mayank]

looks like i can make out all this situation, i know where is this thing pointed at... good work

[micky]

þhank you :)

[Mayank]

i hope whatever the issue is resolved sooner or later...

[micky]

im trying but I have alot on my plate

[Mayank]

you can discuss, if you want too, not here. you know.

[AaronFreitas]

What a deep write Micky. I love the descriptions you use and just the brutal truth to the person you are talking to. Great work :)

[micky]

Thank you Aaron :)

[marcus]

Really great, I loved it!

[micky]

thank you :)

[marcus]

you should write short stories also!

[marcus]

some of these new ones feel like that

[micky]

i want to but i get impatient with myself

[marcus]

Ya, I know what you mean!!

[Rajat malik]

It is a very very very very very....
.(very goes on forever) absorbing poem.
you have nicely portrayed your feelings in this.... thanks for sharing it:)

[micky]

Thank you for the kind words and your time :)

[Rajat malik]

Hmmm.....and you are welcome:)

[sereenaoutloud]

This flowed really well almost had like a beat going through it...
Very raw and honest write.

[micky]

Thank you :)

[TheOne&Only]

A hard write of strong emotions. Going cold is inevitable. Loved it!

[micky]

Thank you :)