You and I

I let you slip in...
I always leave the door open for you
And your always at some point "there"

This is our "thing"
There's nothing I can do
You always leave me gasping for Air

You leave, I'm happy for a while
You leave, I go out...
You leave, I feel strong

Then you come back...I never smile
You come back, the voices in my head tend to shout
This has been our relationship for far to long

Your an unwelcome house guest
Living in an empty domain
..my heart

I try my best
To end this sick little game
But you refuse to part...

Ways
You want me to end ...me
Until I do, you stay...

Until my last days
Ur the darkness in me... maybe?
But you remain in my empty sole until my last day

Reviews

[Bohrium Guy]

Your poem is a fine display of passion and romance with excellent imagery focus on love and mutuality with a bit of bittersweet tones. I really enjoyed this write.

~Rob~

[micky]

Wow.thank.you soo very much for the amazing reviews

[hanir]

This is real. So sad but yet so true. I feel you.

[micky]

Thank you for your kind words :)

[marcus]

Wow, that's deep.......awesome!

[micky]

Thanks Marcus and sorry for the late reply:)

[marcus]

how are things?

[micky]

There god thanks hope u well :)

[~]

How difficult it is to let go.. and how to do it? I liked the strong movement throughout these lines, and the desire to break free.

[micky]

Thank you very much for the review and sorry for the late reply

[sereenaoutloud]

This is beautifully written but sad....knowing we need to let go but finding it so hard to do!!

[micky]

Thank you so much Sereena :)

[sereenaoutloud]

always welcome Micky! :)

[wordman]

a sad write,you love ,but you know it`s not working,but you can`t let go
and he wont

[micky]

Yeah sad times....
Thank you for the review Word man ;)

[wordman]

it was my pleasure