You're Not Going To Get In

I'm done with everything

Every love

And everyone

It doesn't matter how hard you try

To get closer to someone

It's always going to be up to them

If they let you in or not

For me

If you tear down this barrier

It already means you've done a lot

But it never means I'll let you in

No matter how long it took you to get this far

I don't care

Your probably not going to get in

Whether you like it or not

 

Author's Note

This was a little mean... =( sorry... It was about so stupid guy that won't leave me alone.

Reviews

[WriterSki7]

Oh . . . you'd be surprised at how the human psych works. We're affected by more than we like to admit.

No apology necesssary. Reality doesn't pick favorites, and neither do I. Though I need to remark, this is more like a list of feelnigs rather than a poem . . . but the educated know it doesn't need to rhyme to be a peom, either! Good job.

[Richard Longbow]

I'd agree with you that this poem was a little mean, but oh well. Writing can't be nice all the time. You definitely sound fed up with something in this poem. I think you did a good job.

[StoryTailor]

Not quite a poem is it?

...

Ah, well, I forgive you. Even if it saddens me a little. Haha, no worries, right? And here I thought we were making progress, love! Haha. Nawn, it's a nice peace, even if a little stern. But lets face it, sometimes you have to be stern, don't you?