Locked within my own mind

Locked within my own mind,

is where all my demons hide,

reaching out for help that isn't there,

no way to escape,

so tired of struggling to no await,

im exhausted,

worn out,

tired,

every fiber in my bones is weak ,

and here I am screaming .....

LET ME OUT 

Author's Note

#depressed

Reviews

[Sira YR]

I like this poem; the only thing is the line "every fiber in my bones are weak." You need to change the word ARE to IS as that would be grammatically correct. Other than that it was depressing yet thought provoking at the same time.

Good job, midnight and welcome to Writerscafe :)

YR.

[Samael]

Sigh, reading your poems. I can relate with you in many ways. That is why I like writing about lucifer. I had a fall, where I couldn't believe what I'd become. Unlike Satan, I don't see myself as pure evil, but who knows, I'm cold and I think I might be at the bottom

[midnight]

wish i could pull you out but im stuck to

[Samael]

Ah a fallen angel,

[midnight]

i guess i am but im trying to change everything about me and fix my mistakes

[Samael]

You don't need to change everything. Just those wings.

[midnight]

thank you same to you

[Paul Bell]

Life does have this habit of kicking you down and keeping you there for a time, but this can also give you the chance to reassess life and see if little changes can help. Hope things get better.