chilling

chilling

the chilling is cold

as the nights unfold

eating it victims alive

eating them raw and whole

but is it your fault you cant run

no matter how much you try to get in the sun

it doesn't make a difference if you hide

you either get out dead or alive

but their is something you can do

stay away from the chilling

and that's all you can do

Reviews

[Lulu]

Rach you have true nice,amazing talent!! I'm glad that I can call you my bffl and ur mad funny!!

[Team_Jaward_Gale]

nice buddddddddy and san juan mexico really

[WinterIce<3]

LOVE IT! :)

[luna11]

This is a great poem :D
I really like it.
You forgot the apostrophe in can't, by the way.
Well written
xx

[Lulu]

Nice!!

[Mockingbird]

there's a sense of terror and despair. it sounds like a bad nightmare you awake with a cold sweat. great poem.