creature of darkness

Floating on air i walk through this valley of darkness surrounded by all the shadows and fear i go along looking for that promised light at the end of the tunnel

As the years go by i wait and wait and i have yet to see see that light and i wonder did i miss my turn somewhere along my journey or was i so blinded by all the shadows and doubts that i completly missed?

I have lost all sense of time and direction and i have stopped looking for that light amoung that darkness

And as the last part of me is fade within the darkness i see a light ever so small and yet it is stilll there and as i get closure to it it is so blinding and i wonder if it is too late i wonder if i have become a creature of darkness to corrupt by the shadows all around me to ever really be able walk in the light.

Reviews

[Secretwriter93]

Nice read. Especially for a first write

[lovelypetals]

I like the way you write you always talk about darkness and light, I like that lol

[Cherry Pepperweb]

I really like the theme. Relatable with a message that if we walk too long in darkness (or depression) that finding happiness again seems unattainable and daunting.

[Secretwriter93]

Nice poem... Talks about how we all must travel through darkness sometimes it is consuming... One tiny particle of light is all it takes to find your way back... :)

[blackfairy3]

Thanks im glad u liked it and very nice to meet u :)

[fleamailman]

("...liked it..." went the goblin)

[blackfairy3]

Thank you so much for reading my wtitting i am so glad you liked it and thank you so much for reviewing. I really appreciate it ;)