Forbidden Love

I know it isn't meant to be

Something so sporadic and free

So pure and true

It can't happen to me and you

 

I have a life and a wife

But yet it is true

I long to be with someone

That is just like you

 

To you I can talk

And feel happy as should be

Then reality hits

And it's to hard for me.

Reviews

[Annalisa]

...this is hard, because I think everyone can relate at one point or another... I know that I've been there. Good work though, you caught the longing yet almost hopelessness in the situation well. There were two typos and as per usual they are below. Great work though.

"And feel happy as should be"-------actually I don't have a suggestion on how to fix this but it makes no sense at all.

And lastly in the last line in needs to be too not to.

[shadadakiya]

sometimes things only happen to wake you up and then makes you that much stronger god bless you